Broken soul

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I watched you grow up
Watched you blossom
From a stiff young girl
To a gorgeous lady
Still I waited
We were soulmates
No one was gonna take you away
Still waiting
Oblivious to his devices
He watched, lurking
Caressing you with his cold hands
Stole you while I watched
Starved my eyes of the sight of your smile
Took you to a place I was not
My heart went with you 6feet below
My lips shook with unuttered words
Why this jewel
Why take my soulmate
Leaving me neither a soul nor a mate.


Posted by Gracee

Comments

chekwube uyanwune said…
Nice .. Need to work on choice of words though, you can thrill us more if u add more rhymes at the end of lines ..
Kudos
9 March 2016 at 01:26
Janet Etuk said…
Thank you, will put that into consideration.
9 March 2016 at 08:21
Unknown said…
Rhymes don't make a poem great, this is quite nice and yes you can do better but not necessarily by rhyming
12 August 2017 at 19:14

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